For Monday's class, we are going to look at a "bad" essay written by one of my former students, David. We will then talk about why EXACTLY this essay has some problems. When David's classmates read his essay, they also pointed out some problems and so I will show you how he revised his work.
I hope this discussion will help us talk about the two essays that will see on Wednesday (Jesse M and Kelsey). Everyone's essay will be due on Friday so be sure to let me know if you need any help at all!
I know the first essay is often the most stressful. Let me know if I can help in anyway! :D
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